tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504093210058899581.post1581222155888211245..comments2023-10-12T19:21:53.822+08:00Comments on A TEACHER'S ODYSSEY: IELTS Writing Makeover No. 61Miracelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07639432598248928506noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504093210058899581.post-1528328853171675052011-12-30T20:06:36.789+08:002011-12-30T20:06:36.789+08:00This essay lacks full support to the points/sub id...This essay lacks full support to the points/sub ideas being made.Neither it is fully developed and nor extended (fully) so Task response will be scored less.<br /><br />Comparison language such as easier and faster has not been explained or supported.Example: easier ( must be explained well with a comparison to the normal level otherwise this comparison will be generalised or inexplicable).I do not think whoever scored this essay know IELTS scoring but just "General English essay".The proof-reader overly focused upon this essay's vocabulary and grammar.Joshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08191352209514641958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504093210058899581.post-18814738219204840432011-10-14T11:21:22.205+08:002011-10-14T11:21:22.205+08:00Attend and learn UNLIMITED REVIEW IELTS at Speedyc...Attend and learn <a href="http://www.speedycourse.com.ph/courses/4132/unlimited-review-ielts" rel="nofollow">UNLIMITED REVIEW IELTS</a> at Speedycourse.com.phscfinderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11734645196353171688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4504093210058899581.post-30505119231642290092011-10-04T09:22:34.858+08:002011-10-04T09:22:34.858+08:00This is a good writing. The first paragraph is an ...This is a good writing. The first paragraph is an introduction. The following 2 paragraphs explain why the computer is a hindrance. The remaining paragraphs are about the writer's opinion. This structure is very logical and answers the question directly which is very good.IELTS Writing Sampleshttp://www.studyhorror.com/ielts-writing-task-1noreply@blogger.com