The following essay was written by Jenny. She writes her arguments regarding learning English in a foreign country.
Now that English is the most widespread
spoken language throughout the world, it is essential for everyone to learn
English. Each person have their way to learn it, for example, some of them
study at school, while some learn by themselves. Many people believe that the
best way to master their English skills is to study in an English-speaking
community. I totally agree with them; however, I think that is not the only way
to learn the language.
Learning how to use English among
native speakers is always the best effective for learners. It is because when
talking or listening to the native, they can both learn a wide range of
vocabulary in many fields and improve their pronunciation, which leads to their
betterment in speaking and listening. Learners can also have access to a large
number of newspaper, magazines and books in English as well as gain more
materials for their writing. Besides, they can practise a lot and may have the
native correct their mistakes. To give an example, my cousin studying in the
USA uses English better than I do much that we started learning it at the same
On the other hand, many people can not
afford to study English in a English-speaking country. Nevertheless, there are
several ways for them to learn the language. First of all, they can take
courses in their own city, learning grammar and vocabulary as well as
practising with their teachers and classmates. Secondly, thanks to the
development of Internet and other means of communication, learners can study at
home by using e-book, reading online newspapers and magazines along with taking
online tests. They are also able to practise English via social networks such
as Facebook, Skype and so on. I am, for instance, subscribing VOA channel on
Youtube to practise listening and using my blog to improve my writing.
In conclusion, it is no doubt that
learning a foreign language among native speakers is the best way. However, in
my opinion, there are a number of ways to be good at that language without
going abroad. It depends on learners’ will, I believe.
You were able to give your reasons why
you think that it is possible to learn English even if not going abroad. You
gave concrete examples to prove your point. However, avoid multiple main points
in one paragraph.
Good education vocabulary was used:
online tests, e-book, reading online newspapers.
Good transition words were used: on the
other hand, in conclusion. However, improve organization by using the
Body Paragraph 1 – Agree 1
Body Paragraph 2 – Agree 2
Body Paragraph 3 – Disagree 1
RANGE AND ACCURACY
There are some grammar errors:
Each person have = each person has
Best effective = most effective
Than I do much = than I do
In a English-speaking country = in an
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